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You're probably right about the story haha its been a while since I read it. I may be confusing the author with Hills Like White Elephants.

I'm not sure this is really a review. This is honestly kinda rude I think. I posted my work to hopefully hear some critiques and suggestions. I'm glad you enjoyed ...

Thank you, that's actually really helpful. Now that I read it again I think I see another way to fix that stanza. Possibly this I should hope that their words ...

You're right. Wow, how did I ever forget about that story? Haha

I was really trying to keep a sharp contrast between the two parents, while the drinking stanza is fiction, the rest of this is based on true events, and what ...

It was intended to be one sided. Thank you for the comment though.

Thank you, I'm glad you could connect with it, sometimes we really have to think about the things our parents teach us, and some recent things made me realize what ...

Sorry, I wasn't taking it that way, I was attempting to make a joke of my own lack of proofreading.

I now see how much I mispelled in my previous response.

Thanks for the review, and yes grammar is so.etching I'm usually crazy about, but I'm edition from my phone so it's hard to do. And I did find a guy ...

Thanks your review is really helpful. I was having a lot of trouble when writing this with the tense. Also this was typed on my phone. I have a lot ...

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you.

Please do, I'd love to hear your thoughts on the full thing.

Thank you for the review. I would like to note, that something went wrong in posting this, so it has been fixed. For some reason a great deal of the ...