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Wow! That was really good! Your detail and imagery is amazing! I felt like I was there. I want to know what happens! Please continue with this story! I can ...

I liked this story a lot! It was short and very romantic. I liked how you mixed the lyrics in with the plot line, it was very well done. The ...

I was so happy to read your third chapter. :D This is all getting very exciting. Once again I have been beat to the grammar mistakes so I will not ...

I am too late to point out grammar mistakes and things of the sort so all that is left for me to say is good job! I liked it a ...

What happens!?!?!?!?!?! I can't wait to find out what happens! :o You have me completely hooked so take a bow, that was very good. Just a few things... "Oh, right. ...

I loved it! Its was such a great story. I am enjoying it more and more as the story progresses. Your characters are interesting and they are ready to keep ...

You did what a prologue is suppose to do, I want to read more. You have me interested and I can't wait to find out what happens. Two things though, ...

Yay! The eight chapter! Your writing was good as always and your plot line is as addicting as ever. Just a few things... “Well don’t be mad at me too! ...

I am so sorry! It was so hard for me to concentrate on your story with all the slang...Other then that, nice story. You gave it you own twist with ...

I just read all seven chapters and I would just like to say that this story is simply... griping It really is amazing and it was the highlight of my ...

The mistake I saw has already been pointed out so there is nothing left for me to say but... Nice story! I like the setting and it was just enough ...

*Gasp* Well I was ready to be whisked away after you first described him playing his violin. You were really able to convey how much he loved playing and what ...

Okay, so it was really cute! I didn't really like that they were 18...I mean a twizzler? Maybe I am just a hopeless romantic. There are a few grammar errors ...

*Falls on floor laughing* Wow, thank you. This is great, like a breath of fresh air. You can get a little tired of reading about things and its all perfect. ...

That was really great. Your descriptions of things are great, its like a breath of fresh air, I can see everything so vividly and crisply. All of the critic points ...