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Hey there! Thanks for the PM! :) Okay here it goes... I thought this chapter was good, not bad, but not great either. These chapters are needed though, they're filler ...

Hello, hello! I am here to review! Stop shaking, it won't be that bad! :lol: Okay, first off, I offer my congratulations as I liked this chapter even more then ...

Ohhhh...GOOD! :o Welcome YWS! Feel free to call me mars! :wink: Your story was very good. Are you trying to put a twist on the whole Cinderella thing? It kind ...

*Rubs eyes* Woah, okay! :o Hey! Welcome! Feel free to call me mars. Alrighty, well I see that most of the nit picks have been done for me so I ...

Woah, okay! Nice. That is the word that comes to mind while reading. Your plot, though just developing is interesting. I want to know what is coming next, and as ...

Oh my dearly goodness! :oops: Okay, first lest my tell you how hugely sorry I am, I know I have been absent far to long from posting... Now! To the ...

Masters of the art of torture are nothing compared to you. CLIFFHANGER.... :evil: Now that is true torture with this story! :wink: Amazing chapter, I have no job to do ...

I loved this! It was great, it really captured how a break up is. Their characters are great and real, and your use of vocabulary/detail is amazing. I really liked ...

Another chapter! *jumps up and down* This is SO good! :D Okay, first off I didn't have a problem with the length. I love this story so I wish it ...

Hey! I am here to review! Okay, I like your writing style and then the writing itself is very good. I only have one crit. and that is that at ...

Ooooo....this is very good. What is up with you coming out with all these awesome stories? I am now expecting you to be able to keep up posting 2 fantastic ...

Yay! I love this story! Okay so, I thought this was a really good chapter. I don't know what your talking about when you say that you need extra help ...

WOAH... That was amazing! Very intense, it was fantastic! Sorry, can't really give you much of a review. The only thing I can say like you have heard is go ...

I liked it! I am interested and want to know about the old like that makes her so sad... I couldn't find any grammar mistakes so good job there Overall ...

I really truly enjoyed and loved your story. It was a quick but extremely enjoyable read. The idea itself was very original and I like the perspective immensely. I will ...