olivia1987uk

I like the fact that I could apply this to my own situation and emotions and then just as easily apply it to the lady that lives next door, for ...

I get the feeling that this hasn't been proof read. Silly spelling mistakes and whatever make it really difficult to give a blow by blow review as I feel I'd ...

Hmmmm, this seems to me to be more like an exerpt than a stand alone piece. Is this the case? It's odd, in a good way. I decided to read ...

Hi! I really like the way you write. Your grammar is excellent although you do have a tendancy to go "semi-colon happy"! Lol, I do it too!! Only a couple ...

I think karsten has summed this up brilliantly :) the repetition does take away from the decent writing style which obviously is a great shame. I do have another point ...

I'm convinced I'm repeating what all above have said but the colloquial language and phrasing is very endearing. Reminds of someones writing but I can't for the life of me ...

I'm in complete agreement with the above review...Opaque is the perfect way to describe it, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. The writing was excellent as far as I ...

I love the simplicity of this. That's probably down to the ease of which you write, or at least that's the impression I get :) You're writing flows well and ...

My mother let out an exasperated sigh. “She doesn't believe me.” she said to the older man. He smiled, “And can you blame her, we'll just have to show her, ...

The amendments are already done so I can't really comment on the improvements its made other than looking at what has been suggested. The suggestions I've briefly scanned look excellent ...

Hmmmmmm Well written overall, but I'm not the biggest fan of sexually explicit writing. I think it is much more powerful when expressed via euphemisms. Just an opinion I found ...

Hi! What a happy little piece! Lol! It's pretty good to be honest...your shiny new laptop must have you very inspired. I don't like happy endings either so all is ...

The premise on this is good...I like it There are a couple of typos in the form of capitalisation and other minor things, but I won't patronise you and point ...

Ooooh first to comment on this Now I wish I had the time to completely check through for everything, but if you don't mind, I'll leave that for someone else ...

Really enjoyed reading this for the following reasons... - The fact the characters names are uncommon and not overused within the text. - Your colloquial, yet grammatically excellent, narrative style.