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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Cage

    Hello! To get started, I just want to put a general statement out there by saying this is fantastic! I enjoyed reading it, and I even started to think of ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Why Nice Guys Finish Last

    Well spoken, truly. It's the harsh truth we all seem to face, but no one seems to understand enough to quit pursuing the "asshole". So do you see the problem ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ode to a Bat

    This is wonderful, I love it! Your last two lines are the ones that stuck out the most to me, and are pretty much my favorite lines. I really loved ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Brothers

    I just wanted to state, that I think I really love this poem. The way you describe everything, the words you chose, the way you write. Just everything about it, ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dreamland.

    Hi there! I have some good and some bad to say about this poem, but to start off on the right foot, I did enjoy reading this! First off, I ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sinking

    I really enjoyed reading this! Not only was the message it was trying to get across clear, and the emotion was felt (at least for me) as well. I don't ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Shipwrecked Love

    I saw the title and expected some long-drawn out poem... But, when I read what you wrote here, I was impressed! Your simplicity here is beautiful, and I love the ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Your Brother...

    To start off, I just wanted to say the entire time I read this I had a little smirk on my face the whole time, because to me I found ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stardust

    Hi! I do enjoy the blunt honesty that you have going on in your writing. I also enjoy that you basically covered a simple human emotion that most of us ...

    Jul 4, 2011


Blessed is the man who, having nothing to say, abstains from giving us wordy evidence of the fact.
— George Eliot