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Re: Cage
Hello! To get started, I just want to put a general statement out there by saying this is fantastic! I enjoyed reading it, and I even started to think of ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Why Nice Guys Finish Last
Well spoken, truly. It's the harsh truth we all seem to face, but no one seems to understand enough to quit pursuing the "asshole". So do you see the problem ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Ode to a Bat
This is wonderful, I love it! Your last two lines are the ones that stuck out the most to me, and are pretty much my favorite lines. I really loved ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Brothers
I just wanted to state, that I think I really love this poem. The way you describe everything, the words you chose, the way you write. Just everything about it, ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Dreamland.
Hi there! I have some good and some bad to say about this poem, but to start off on the right foot, I did enjoy reading this! First off, I ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Sinking
I really enjoyed reading this! Not only was the message it was trying to get across clear, and the emotion was felt (at least for me) as well. I don't ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Shipwrecked Love
I saw the title and expected some long-drawn out poem... But, when I read what you wrote here, I was impressed! Your simplicity here is beautiful, and I love the ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Your Brother...
To start off, I just wanted to say the entire time I read this I had a little smirk on my face the whole time, because to me I found ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Stardust
Hi! I do enjoy the blunt honesty that you have going on in your writing. I also enjoy that you basically covered a simple human emotion that most of us ...
Jul 4, 2011
