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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Sleepless

    I really liked this. Like the other reviewer said, you could definitely hear it in your head when you read it. :) They lyrics were nice, and they definitely got ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re:

    I really liked this! It was cute and true, which is always a lovely combination. :) It had a nice overall feel, but it was a bit choppy in some ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dance!

    This was super fun to read! It had a really nice rhythm to it, which a really added to the fact that it was about dance. It felt a bit ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: God the Dealer

    Huh. I read this through a few times, and I have to say that I really liked it. I love it when people do what they want to language. Grammar ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I think of you

    I like this - it's sweet. It's got a nice sound. But I agree with the person above me, the rhyme scheme should be consistent and carry on throughout the ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Whom It May Concern version 2.0

    I really liked this. I like this style - it's out of control in a really controlled way, if that makes sense. I was confused in a few spots, but ...

    Apr 11, 2011


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)