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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Sleepless

    I really liked this. Like the other reviewer said, you could definitely hear it in your head when you read it. :) They lyrics were nice, and they definitely got ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re:

    I really liked this! It was cute and true, which is always a lovely combination. :) It had a nice overall feel, but it was a bit choppy in some ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dance!

    This was super fun to read! It had a really nice rhythm to it, which a really added to the fact that it was about dance. It felt a bit ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: God the Dealer

    Huh. I read this through a few times, and I have to say that I really liked it. I love it when people do what they want to language. Grammar ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I think of you

    I like this - it's sweet. It's got a nice sound. But I agree with the person above me, the rhyme scheme should be consistent and carry on throughout the ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Whom It May Concern version 2.0

    I really liked this. I like this style - it's out of control in a really controlled way, if that makes sense. I was confused in a few spots, but ...

    Apr 11, 2011


I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.
— Bilbo Baggins