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Re: Sleepless
I really liked this. Like the other reviewer said, you could definitely hear it in your head when you read it. :) They lyrics were nice, and they definitely got ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re:
I really liked this! It was cute and true, which is always a lovely combination. :) It had a nice overall feel, but it was a bit choppy in some ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Dance!
This was super fun to read! It had a really nice rhythm to it, which a really added to the fact that it was about dance. It felt a bit ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: God the Dealer
Huh. I read this through a few times, and I have to say that I really liked it. I love it when people do what they want to language. Grammar ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: I think of you
I like this - it's sweet. It's got a nice sound. But I agree with the person above me, the rhyme scheme should be consistent and carry on throughout the ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: To Whom It May Concern version 2.0
I really liked this. I like this style - it's out of control in a really controlled way, if that makes sense. I was confused in a few spots, but ...
Apr 11, 2011
