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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: all the pretty things

    I just wanted to tell you how much I loved this. It was a very touching piece, and I wanted to tell you well done! This isn't really a review, ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Definition of a Plot Bunny

    This is so cute! I'm not actually writing a review right now, I'm just telling you it's perfect, funny, tasteful and awesome!!! :) Keep up the good work!!!

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Flawed

    I re-read it, and I love it! Wonderful! I'm not going to go line by line review, simply because I will have to highlight nearly everything blue :) I think ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Girls

    I just wanted to drop by to say this was great! I love your main character - you got him through really well! You phrased everything very nicely! I really ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Worried

    Thank you very much everyone! I'll work on a background story :) I'm really glad you liked it and am very grateful for all of your helping reviews! Thanks! Ofir

    Jan 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Letters To Cody - 1

    Thank you, guys for all your help! I really appreciate it. Letters To Codie is really, really important to me. Teardrop - first off, thanks for the review :) I ...

    Oct 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [11]

    You are a genius. Simple as that. I thought it was just dramatic enough, I absolutely adored how you described the kiss, everything was perfect. Don't change it. I mean ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [9]

    I'm getting sick of telling you how perfect it is. So I'll say it just one more time. It's perfect. The end. :) Ofir

    Sep 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: How to Seduce Money [1]

    Priceless. I love this. I love your character's voice, and I love Alice's character. I love the plot - I love it all. Gresat job. No, sawesome. Pm me for ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: He Didn't Like Me

    Thank you everyone for your reviews! It means a lot to me. I apologize for not sending pms, but rather doing this together. To those of you who misunderstood, this ...

    Feb 24, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    I'd have to say Witch Season. I found the descriptions depthless, the characters boring, and the plot absolutely dreadful. Who's with me?

    Oct 15, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Movie for Twilight (Part Two)

    This was so funny! I especially loved the part about the keys. LOL. This rocks. By the way, great imagination, I probably wouldn't have been able to think of about ...

    Oct 6, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: TBRPG strikes again.

    This was, um, not very funny actually. Too much swearing, too implossible, nothing funny at all. Sorry, it was plain disturbing, and I really didn't like it. Shame, the first ...

    Sep 15, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Alex the Queen; title in process

    I love it! It's interesting and it makes me want to read more, which is what a prologue must do. It was very very short, so there is not much ...

    Jul 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Light Blue Eyes - Chapter 1

    Wow I loved it!!! It was really, really good! I'm sorry I can't add more. There's just not much to critesize. I loved it all! Please please, PM me for ...

    Jun 29, 2009


We are great at fearing the wrong things.
— Hank Green