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Re: Positive Chapter Two (edited)
I really like the story idea! I can see why Chase doesn't like Randy, Randy is acting like a big huge jerk. My only thing to say is making sure ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Faces Show Different Emotions
Hi! I'll be reviewing for you today and I hope I can help out a bit. First, this poem is rather short. It's always hard to review a meaningful poem ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: Sunny Side Up- Chapter one
Well, you know me for telling you what is wrong and what is right. But this tiime, I'll give you some tips! Can't go wrong with that. 1. When writing ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Betrayal
Hey Suzy!! Just came to read your poem! First things first, I know other reviews said the same but oh well, make sure your punctuation marks are correct. It gets ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Town of Dissadent
Some of this reminds me of how we were talking just the other night, lol. Anyways, it's interesting of how much you can imagine through a single script. It is ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Zinglore Chronicles: Book One- Intro Part 2/2
Good job, Kendall!! I like the fact you use just enough detail to get a picture going in my head. The krelt is still freaking me out a bit, but ...
Jan 17, 2009