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Ah, thank you! :)

Thank you for your review!

Ah, thank you. Yes, that was a typo, I didn't even notice :D I'll try adding a few more elements and go over the sixth paragraph :)

Thank you! I'll have a re-read of it.

Thank you for your advice. I did do a little research and saw that with advanced cervical cancer they normally take out the ovaries as well and I didn't realize ...

Thank you for your advice. It's very difficult when it comes to monologue to keep the written version as interesting as it could. They are meant to be performed and ...

I think my other pieces need a bit of work but when they're ready, I'll let you know :)

Thank you, these reviews have been really helpful :)

Thank you again! You really are good at reviews :D

Ah, thank you! I'll try to sort these out :)

Okay, you seriously need to work on your review skills. I probably will take you some of your advice like the typos, sentence structure and better improving my battle scene. ...

Ah thank you! She says, "It's Zajanah" just to herself, I'll put an "I said" after it so that it is more clear :)

Ah, thank you! That's really lovely to here. I think I need to work on the opening lines because the last section is 8 million years before the plot but ...

Thank you! That really means a lot :) Your advice was helpful as well!

Ah, that's really lovely to hear. Don't worry about pointing stuff out I definitely needed it. I'll see to the changes soon, they were really helpful. Thank you!