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Hello again! I don't think this chapter was as compelling as the previous one I reviewed and I'll try to explain why in my review. I also noticed I got ...

Hello! I have to admit I have only read half of this if that. This is way too long, no reader is going to sit here and read a chapter ...

Hello! So I haven't read anything else but the prologue so I understand a little bit but not that much. This review will be mostly about the writing style and ...

Hello! So I haven't read any of your other works, though I did enjoy reading this. This review will be purely on characterisation in this chapter and your writing style. ...

Hi Ninlil! I know this is quite old but I wanted to thank you for reviewing Journey of Acceptance (I know that was a while a go but I haven't ...

Hello! Occymay here for a review. I have to admit I found this rather confusing at times. I think you need to work mostly on dialogue, I'm guessing you haven't ...

Hi Bubbles, I know this is an old piece but I wanted to thank you for reviewing of Knowing Gods. I just wanted to say how beautiful and sad and ...

Hi Mage! This was a good chapter and I really loved the Bartimaeus Trilogy elements, it makes me want to go re read them :D Positives- I liked the character ...

Hi marmalade! Well, I will defiantly need to carrying on reading this :) I thought the writing was good and as an army it is calling to me :D Positives- ...

Hello Mage! Here for my third review :) Once again, great stuff and I'm glad I choose your work for my final review of the day, short but sweet :D ...

Hello! So this piece was interesting and quite mysterious in its own way but I'm slightly confused at what was going on. Positives- I quite like the way you write ...

Hello! This piece is incredibly interesting and I'm intrigued to find out more about this. Positives- You were able to create a lot of mystery in your piece which is ...

Hello! As an actor, I really enjoyed reading this because I love scripts and I also love fantasy. Positives- I felt that you were really good at creating tension and ...

Hello! Okay, this piece seems very interesting and I want to find out more about it. I saw in a previous post that the human inside the pod is the ...

Hello Marmalade! Here for another review :) Thank goodness, you did a great job with your English terminology and I can tell you clearly either know England well or you ...