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Like most pieces, there was the occasional grammar mistake, but nothing major. Overall, I very much liked it! All I could recommend would be the spacing--I believe that the more ...

I love how vividly one can imagine the scene as it is discribed, and the story behind it. It is thrilling, it is enchanting. Truly, I adore the story itself, ...

Some grammer mistakes, and a few punctuation errors, but I very much enjoyed the read. It was relatable, I believe, which draws the reader in, and I liked the way ...

The story itself was wonderful, I believe. But the question marks...well, you could do without them. And I believe that it makes for a cleaner, more lucid read if there ...

Well, just as everybody else has said, I found it very relatable, even though not everybody chooses this way. The raw emotion of the girl, and the way she saw ...

I love how way the piece flowed, and how you used just enough description to get the message across. Truly, it was beautiful. I'd ask for a sequel if I ...