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Nice poem... yet, there are some issues to be raised... :smt064 The way the lines go on, it bores me to be straight with you. You connect each one okay, ...

:) This is a rather okay poem, but you kinda just go over the same thing, again and again... :smt015 You should concentrate on showing this through different ways, not ...

Yes, this is an amazing book! :) I'm a MEGA zombie lover and i've been a fanatic of everyting to do with zombies, since i clocked 'Resident Evil 2' When ...

:) This is an amazing piece, i actually imagined the scene in Saving Private Ryan, when the guy gets shell shocked on pearl harbor. This small section of writing creates ...

:) I really like this poem, it makes me think happy thoughts! :lol: I would advise, like Navita has said, to make some sort of meaning into your poem, as ...

Very nice poem :) It flows quite nicely, and certain lines cast very colourful images in my head :) Well done :) Yet, they're are certain points that put me, ...

Its a nice poem, but im trying to get my head around the aspect and meaning of your poem... Explain please :P i can kinda get the drift... But overall, ...