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Re: The night of angels
The lonely ghost Sings so beautifully I love that. My favorite two lines in a piece that I liked very much overall. I really enjoy seeing this kind of thought ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: Catching Wind
(Ach, I'm such a lazy critic.) I apologize in advance for the general-ness of what follows. I just really want to say that I love the use of italics throughout ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: Currently untitled haiku
Hmm. Okay, the thing about haiku: you have seventeen syllables. Yeah, duh, you know that, but my point is that you don't have a lot of space. Haiku typically deal ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: Butterfly Memories
Several things. First of all, this is a really interesting poem, especially in the movements it describes. I like the memories that "drift" and "float" like butterflies. The impression I ...
Jul 22, 2009
