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Re: ???The End of The World
That is great that you would honestly save the little girl. I can honestly tell you I wouldn't under those circumstances. It wouldn't affect as much as it did this ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: The Stream
Okay i understand what you mean. and since you explained it that way I'm kind of embarrassed lol and I am unsure about any mistake I thought I saw. Formidable ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: ???The End of The World
Along with a review or a comment I would like to request those reading this to tell me what they would do in a situation like this and why. It's ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: The Boys in Blue Chapter 2
I apologize for confusing you. I tried to tell you indirectly Melvin Killed Anthony. Also there's a lot more to Cobbs than you realize. Thanks for the nitpicking and your ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: The Boys in Blue Chapter 1
Thank you for pointing out my mistake with tense! I will be sure to work on it in my next chapter
May 27, 2014 -
Re: The Boys in Blue Chapter 1
Thank you for the pointers!I will try to use them in the next chapter. Also, you will have to read the next chapter to figure out more.
May 27, 2014 -
Re: The Boys in Blue Chapter 1
I appreciate your review.
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Freedom vs safety
You are correct. That is the message. I am not exactly great with punctuation. That is the biggest problem I have. And Thanks
May 24, 2014 -
Re: Freedom vs safety
Thank you
May 16, 2014 -
Re: B
I think so
May 16, 2014 -
Re: B
Skyrim is amazing!
May 16, 2014 -
Re: Skipping Stones
The story was something that most people can relate to but what really won me over was the structure. I would have to agree with null25."Thursday" did stand out quite ...
May 16, 2014
