noobPunk

I like the lyrics. I thought it was popish or pop rock. Ill be honest actually had no idea where the melody or the beat is (well there isn’t any). ...

This was kinda good but i bit too typicall. I kinda expected this to happen from the start till the very end. I read same types of scripts alot so ...

"Maim Kill BURN!!!!" haha I love chaos! This was a awesome speech! I love the way how marine captains and chaplains give there speeches before battles and planet raides. This ...

Finally a 40k story!!! I have been searching one in YWS for a bit. I really liked it but for the readers that dont understand about 40k they will have ...

It was pretty good. Not too good but interesting to read. As a Halo fan Im usually a strong critt on this but Ill just be easy on you I ...

My impression of this was that the idea was good but it wasent worked out more then 50%. Unless if this was a small poem this was very good but ...

:D haha I totally understand you. I understand that feeling when you need to kick the song of your chest! The idea of the song is very well done and ...

My general impressions for this that it was very cool and entertaining to read. I suck at checking grammar like other critts do so I didnt bother. The theme is ...

My first lyric to critt in a long time. my general impression is that this was pretty good and really cool. Perhaps more cool then good :D Reason why is ...