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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Subject 47 - Chapter 3

    Yet another Chapter List review tonight. Man I'm on a roll. Between this and the last chapter, it's more disjointed than the smooth flow of before. When first introduced into ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Subject 47 - Chapter 2

    Another Chapter List review. The third tonight! The transition between this chapter and the first chapter was good. It definitely made a good place for a quick break and you ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Subject 47 - Chapter 1

    Another Chapter List review for you and another 100 points for Team Blue's Clues. The first paragraph was interesting here. By its style, I instantly knew it was a monologue, ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Subject 47 - Prologue

    Your List[/ur] review coming right up. Interesting prologue here. There are certainly a lot of questions brought up in this segment. I'm especially curious as to how/why the MC got ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Broken (chapter three)

    Your Slaughterhouse from The Chapter List . It's always a pleasure to serve. You asked for it harsh, so here it comes. The Chopping Block First things first, the bridge ...

    Jun 21, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Broken (chapter two)

    Sorry about the wait. My internet had a spaz-attack and separated me from my life. The withdrawal was horrible! :) Well, anyone, another Lemon from The Chapter List . Another ...

    Jun 17, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Broken (chapter one)

    One juicy Lemon from The Chapter List coming right up. Please note that I haven't read the other reviews so that way my opinion isn't tainted. This is an intriguing ...

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stella and Luna

    One Chapter List review, slaughterhouse style, coming right up. The Meat Grinder [Changes in italics[/], comments in bold . Stella and Luna Two girls, forever laughing at themselves (life Why ...

    May 29, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: Sorry please ignore this ...

    This review of the above apology is solely for my amusement and the amusement of anyone who happens to stumble across this. This poem is just horrible. Thee lines, no ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: A Day in the Life

    Guess what lilymoore, it's review time! How exciting! :) I like this poem that you've written here. It paints a not-so-unfamiliar picture in a rather splendid way. Even though a ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Clouds

    This is an interesting poem here, though, I find it a bit short and lacking but that's probably just me. Really, what I find in your poem is that you're ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: To Surrender

    Warning, no frills review below. This poem certainly isn't the best poem I've seen. In fact, it's more like a chunk of prose. Really, there's not even a hint at ...

    May 21, 2012
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: His Reality

    Be warned, this is going to be a very blunt no glitter or frills review. If you do not wish to read a harsh review, do not continue reading this ...

    May 16, 2012
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Infobesity

    It's interesting what you have written here and really does make you think about all the information in today's society, but what you are lacking is solid evidence as to ...

    Jan 29, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Scars only work on bond villains.

    I like this poem here. It has a real nice flow and the pictures have been well built. The rhyming scheme is also nice and consistent and the poem is ...

    Jan 23, 2012


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