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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Broken Bones

    I love the creativity and rhyme scheme in your poem it's similar to you heart poem I like how you compared your heart to broken bones and also I loved ...

    Sep 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dreams of Suicide

    I like how you made yourself seem so vulnerable. Did you really have a dream about suicide? I like how to gave the wind personification you made the poem sound ...

    Sep 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do You Know Fear?

    wonderfully written very nice I really loved it :) I won't annoy you about grammar so don't worry LOL I like the way you started off the poem by saying ...

    Sep 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Skin

    I really love this is expresses so much emotion and panic I really liked it when the guy was the only one able to take off her layers of skin ...

    Sep 16, 2008


Death is cheap, and so is life, but a reputation is not easily recovered.
— SirenCymbaline the Kiwi