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Re: Broken Bones
I love the creativity and rhyme scheme in your poem it's similar to you heart poem I like how you compared your heart to broken bones and also I loved ...
Sep 16, 2008 -
Re: Dreams of Suicide
I like how you made yourself seem so vulnerable. Did you really have a dream about suicide? I like how to gave the wind personification you made the poem sound ...
Sep 16, 2008 -
Re: Do You Know Fear?
wonderfully written very nice I really loved it :) I won't annoy you about grammar so don't worry LOL I like the way you started off the poem by saying ...
Sep 16, 2008 -
Re: My Skin
I really love this is expresses so much emotion and panic I really liked it when the guy was the only one able to take off her layers of skin ...
Sep 16, 2008
