nickjay

Thanks :)

Thanks!!! :)

Thanks a Lot! and yeah The last five lines describe how the society pushes her to her limits but she gets up again refusing to fail.....

Hey! You are hilarious, you know how to warn people and at the same time intrigue them enough to make them want to read your poem. I hope you write ...

Your review just made my day! :) I'm really happy that you don't shy away from pointing out my mistakes. I really appreciate it! Thanks a lot!

Thanks a lot. It really helps to have advice of the readers.

Thanks a lot for the advice, I'm just learning to write and to have people like you who appreciate the work, feels Great!!! Thanks.

I liked the message and the way you personified it...it's good try :)