nicholas42

Ok, there should be 4 line stanzas, but the editing option is being dumb right now and won't allow me to insert spacing. I apologize. I improvised with periods. Anyway, ...

Wow that was detailed! Thanks Olivia, it's great to get feedback. It's hard sometimes to see those things on your own after reading it yourself so many times with a ...

Thanks for the review! I'll work on the punctuation. Just to clarify with the one line though, what was meant is that the narrator is trying to use other women ...

Thanks! I considered adding to it, but that's all that came to me at the time. I wish I had more material for it.

Deleting? I'm sorry, but I didn't do that. I don't want to come off as conceited and ignorant, and I honestly thought there were a couple misinterpretations. I plan on ...

Thank you for the review. I think there's been some confusion as far as what I'm driving at with this, if you don't mind me elaborating? The point of this ...

Thanks Audy! It's always good to get feedback for my poems. The length HAS been a concern of mine with this one. I thought about splitting each line, but then ...