niccy_v

It begins with a flashback, in HER POV and then chops back to present day. I have to fix that later

Oh and i really want to know what happens! Does Natasha follow through? Does she turn up the same? Does Suzan talk to owen? What happens between them? I really ...

Cut in half in case it was tooo long? --- We stand facing each other, neither of us daring to feel the other as the minutes disappeared between our hot ...

You're mean to leave it hanging like that! Arrggh! Woow so many chapters. I will get back to you ASAP!!!!

omg omg omg i love this story... :P Most of my editing, what there is, is in the document below. Firstly: With text messages you can put numbers, rather than ...

Woo. Imaginative. I wonder how much of this applies to your personal experiences?? I joke! I am in the process of editing... it's very good. Well done Shall be back ...

hate them. as i said in the other thread. only extras is good love extras.

Remember - SPELL CHECK! It is your LIFELINE. So easy, yet you appear to have bypassed it, and not because of american-british spelling either. It is your friend, so use ...

i did - but then people combined it into this lengthy 55 page essay that nobody actually finished just began and never ended. What's the point when that happens? Here ...

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Oh you guys rock. I am absolutely loving the reviews. They make sense XD But it is british spelling so i have utterly ignored ALL that American stuff

omg so sorry :( for some reason i posted the completely wrong thing. I will review this for you so i don't feel so mean and horrible.

Oh my god i love the song that has the same name as this!!!!!! From the OC... i love the song... haha random. Getting onto the crit now once i've ...

Anybody?

It also lacks emotion that is essential to the storyline. The characters have minimul emotion, and there is a lot going on in her head, but i can't really imagine ...