neptune

Hey there! I know this is already out of the green room, but I felt intrigued to review this. The main character has a strong set of emotions and opinions ...

Hello there! The theme of nostalgia and memories was very beautiful in this piece. I like how effortlessly you weaved from present-day to past memories – sometimes I feel like ...

Hey, erilea! I like the vulnerability of this poem; it seems very honest and straight to the point (while still being poetic). I also liked your choice of not capitalizing! ...

Aly!! Back for the review that you requested on my thread, let’s get into it! Even though this was a lot of, well, writing in general, I think the build-up ...

Hey manilla! :) Finally getting around to reviewing this work — so sorry for how long it has taken me. Let’s not waste any more time then, let’s hop into ...

Hello Tuck~ Apologies for taking a little longer, I hope my feedback makes up for the wait!

Tuck!

Hey MJ! So I wrote an entire review for this, and it somehow deleted, so I guess I'm back for round two? I remember reading the previous version of this ...

Hello! I think what initially piqued my interest in this piece is your whole idea of teams in this academy. I don't have the backstory of the academy itself, but ...

Hey, jster02! Hope you’re having a good Review Day! Let’s hop right on into the review! He had asked many times to join their game, but until today they’d just ...

Hi Aly! Sorry for the wait — this week has been quite the busy one for me! Let’s not wait for longer and hop into the review right now then, ...

Hey manilla! Sorry for the wait. Seeing as you wanted me to talk about flow , I’ll get into that first. Within the babbling stream lies a benevolent yet spiteful ...

Why hello there, welcome to YWS! Glad to see a work from you! Considering that this chapter is on the shorter side, I’m going to try and flesh out as ...

Hey Beno! Welcome to YWS — it’s nice to see a work from you! Let’s just get into this review, shall we? I’ll start with some nitpicks throughout the piece ...

Hello again! I'll start with some nitpicks and comments and move on from there. Also, it's late here, so apologies if there are typos or if something isn't coherently written ...