neptune

Hello @TornRoses! I see right through several stanzas of this poem you have a pretty straightforward structure, where each stanza ends in the repeated line "don't be afraid". Sometimes repetition ...

Hello, @Midnightmoon! I'll be dropping by to leave a review on your work! ;) This poem was simple and quite short, which gave it a minimal and clean feel. Your ...

Hello, @kirishimaxbokuguo! neptune here to review your work! I will be splitting this review up by chapter, just to be a little more organized! Also, I understand that this is ...

Hello, Biluata! @neptune here for a review! First, right when we jump into this, I see that there is a simple grammatical error. it’s needle claws are reaching up I ...