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  • Poetry » Politics, General Re: Don't be afraid

    Hello @TornRoses! I see right through several stanzas of this poem you have a pretty straightforward structure, where each stanza ends in the repeated line "don't be afraid". Sometimes repetition ...

    Sep 6, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bike Race

    Hello, @Midnightmoon! I'll be dropping by to leave a review on your work! ;) This poem was simple and quite short, which gave it a minimal and clean feel. Your ...

    Aug 15, 2017
  • Other » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Fluffs (part3)

    Hello, @kirishimaxbokuguo! neptune here to review your work! I will be splitting this review up by chapter, just to be a little more organized! Also, I understand that this is ...

    Aug 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Need A Cure (The Colors Are Fading)

    Hello, Biluata! @neptune here for a review! First, right when we jump into this, I see that there is a simple grammatical error. it’s needle claws are reaching up I ...

    Aug 14, 2017


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien