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It's an interesting piece, especially the ending! To be honest, at first I was confused a little, like "what's going on?". However, the ending made it all clear, and the ...

It's an impressive piece! The content is unusual, this makes your story different from all that I read before. However, there are some suggestions, hope they'll be helpful. 1) "The ...

To be honest, that's pretty scary... In a good meaning)) Honestly, I liked this piece even thought it's sad and difficult to read emotionally. Very good writing and deep feelings ...

The overall idea is great, and you are doing great job with using both short and long sentences, it makes the story more real. I've got only one question, why ...

I think there are thousands of people who would like this story, because so many of us have been in situations like this, felt the same things, asked the same ...

I can't even describe how much i like this description! It's awesome, it's lively, so real. To be honest, descriptions of nature are one of my favorite things to write ...

I really liked your poem, it makes the reader feel as if everything described in it happens to him/her. The only thing I would recommend you to change is the ...