natalie

Oh my goodness wow! *Gold Star!* This was absolutely amazing! I felt every word! Is this based on a true story? It felt like it. I could picture everything you ...

Hello. Firstly, you have a very unique story opening here. I cannot say that I have read anything like it before - not that this is a bad thing, far ...

I love the idea of this poem. Though there wasnt much punctuation, Which I feel oucld add more to it, I love the depth of the whole idea. The repetition ...

This was a really enjoyable story, though quite short. I loved the meaning behind it. It was quite interesting and very philosophical. I couldn't find any mistakes and I can ...

Hia. I love these beginning few lines! they really open up the story and explain what its gonna be about, which is exactly what you want them to do. The ...

Hey! I just thought that I'd let you know I love this poem! The way you put across the feel of music really shows. I don't understand why some people ...

Wow! really impressed! I love the ideas. At first, when I read the part about being a royal vampire, I thought it would lead into being incredibly cliched but I ...

hia biscuit. Just wanted to say that this is amazing! the deepness to it is really good and I love the description which appears throughout in just the right places. ...

Oh wow. That was simply beautiful When I saw the title I wasn't sure what to expect but this is so touching and special. If your friend were here to ...

Okay, firstly, I loved it. The really intimate meaning behind the poem really made it stand out. The poem flowed beautifully and I loved the last two stanzas, especially the ...

Overall, I thought that the description was incredibly detailed and quite wonderful, though possibly unnecessary in places. I understand why you would think that the second person might be strange. ...

firstly, like others, I love the idea of using trolls as your main characters. During this beginning section you have already begun to erase the idea of trolls being the ...

I am in love with this poem! Though the meaning is incredibly sad, the soothing rhythm of the poem makes it feel much easier to read and makes the situation ...

I love this poem. It has great feeling and the variation of stanza length adds an amazing structure which is easy to read. The first stanza is amazing, i love ...

I love the poem. Its take on the Greenday song makes it easy to relate to and i actualy prefer the poem to the song, it feels much more melancholy ...