naominana

This is an amazing story and I loved the ending, it was very deep and thoughtful. The whole story had me captivated especially the ending. You had a minor spelling ...

The first paragraph was more toward the fictional kind and at first I thought, 'okay, cool, creept eyes, yup'. And then it got more scientific and then I was like, ...

I love your description of words, it was very thorough and meaningful. I also liked the depth in this, it feels like you put thought into your poem. You haver ...

For some reason, I like these mysterious poems, where you don't know why, just now. I was taught that when writing a poem you put a capital letter for every ...

Amazing, once again. I like how everything is so... real and you can relate to the story. What I want to know is what happened between the two chapters. First, ...

When I saw the title I was like awww... I wanted to do something on a pack. And then I read the story and I was like WOW HOW DO ...

'This time I am sparing you but remember next time I see you people lurking around here or anywhere else straight away suspension' He walked away angrily. 'Phew! We are ...

when those people tried, to kill us all, and then they died? I don't really understand that line, people trying to kill and dying? It could have been written clearer. ...

This poem is really well written, I enjoyed the visualisation that I got from this. It was very beautiful and serene. I suggest you keep writing, that air of mysterious ...

From reading this, I thought that this was a rough draft. Your sentences don't flow, they are rather jagged and broken when you think about it. I think you should ...