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youve conveyed the feelings of hopelessness and despair, i think, quite wonderfully here. my favorite line has got to be, "i wish my comforter lived upto its name." phrases like ...

first off, this poem conveys a very important message that men for generations have needed to hear; so kudos to you for bringing this out. i feel like the first ...

this is such an excellent piece. im not a very experienced writer myself and i know not the first thing about meaningful helpful reviews but i absolutely adored this. mostly ...

this is such a unique poem and i thoroughly enjoyed reading it. the use of your creaative devices while writing this is fun to witness. the red flesh-flash imagery has ...

beautiful haikus. i really liked the second one. but the third one has got to be my favorite although, i couldnt really figure out by what you meant by the ...

the use of your vocabulary in this piece is really intriguing. the excessive use of the word concrete and crushed could have been avoided, but i am a budding writer ...