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Thank you for the criticism, and I think after reading some critiqe, I'm out of my writers block. As for the last 'You were never alone', it was in italics, ...

I just have an additional comment, as I agree with Icy. It's not poetries, it's poems.

I feel that forcing rhyme schemes in often ruin a poem. Unless one easily comes to me. Monotonously forcing one in seems like it will ruin the poem.

I loved this, it was well written, and I enjoyed every line, as well as the message. Grammar wise, I have no nitpicking to do, because it was well written! ...

I liked the prologue, it was mysterious, and made me wan to read the story! The cover was great, I don't think the 'py' in happy in faded, it might ...

I really enjoyed the poem, it was well written. And the idea very well expressed (Reffering to it as a battle gave it away for me). I enjoyed reading it.

I loved the poem. I just don't like the 'school safety' theme, (That's just me, though). The beginning definately captured the mindset of a teenager very well. It was well ...

I assure you, I don't seem to notice any blood on my body and am surely full of life as I write this. Thanks for the criticism, I know it's ...

There we go, all the s gone.

To the first commentor, yes, this poem began about the man predicting the rapture, but can actually be about all zealous predictors, if you will. To the other two, and ...

Well, as explenation. The is an HTML code from another site I go on quite frequently, I didn't realize I wasn't forced to type the blasted thing here!