mystical*dragons

Thank you Myth. Yes, it is very personal. I hope I do get a good grade. :)

Snoink! I love you! Lol... No really this helped a lot. I would have actually spotted these mistakes before but the thing is I wrote this is in a rush. ...

Thanks for the feedback! I have made the changes you suggested. I do have this thing for commas, and I've been trying to let go of the habit of using ...

Interesting piece you have there. Very interesting. I like it. I'd like to see more of it. :) Good job.

Thanks Snoink :) Send it to him? No way, he'd never understand. Oh well...

Hi there, Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this piece. I'm glad you guys liked it :D

It's funny :lol:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it. :D

Thanks you guys! Duskglimmer: Thanks for the suggestions, I'll work on it.

Thanks for the reviews! :D

Thanks Nef, I'm glad you like it :D

The doorbell rings again, and this time I realize that talking to you on the phone was only a figment of my mind. A mere imagination. I was just daydreaming, ...

Oooh, I really like you story. It's interesting and keeps you wanting more. It seems there are some words which are missing, resulting in incomplete sentences which does confuse the ...

Wow, I dont know what to say. This was really well-written, and that's something, coming from me because I rarely like poems.

Thanks, I'm glad you like it! :D