myjaspercat

thank you so much. I bored in class one day, so I wanted to write a poem that really spoke to a lot of people. Glad you liked it.

thank you for the clarification and yes you made sense now. I like your originality.

Hello Fallenoutofgrace, Myjaspercat here for your review Wow, this is the second poem I have review by you, way to go. On with the review... 1.) "Upon galloping feet the ...

of course, that's why I'm here

thank you for suggesting to add detail, but I kind of want this as a very simple piece. If I end up changing it eventually, I will definitely keep what ...

srry bout that, my computer seemed to have a 'hiccup'. Again really srry.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.