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Sounds like my sister's road sickness she gets. Very intriguing . I was wondering what it was untill the near end.

I'd have to say capitalize your Is and all the other begining words in a new line. Flowing pefectly in my point of veiw it's pretty good.

when he and the kind and queen king Very discriptive. It sounds more of a hisorical fiction. Mabe a hybrid of genres? Any way loved it. Quite long to me ...

I know. They aren't finished. My friend liked them, and she wanted to use them in her story so I sayed sure. I told her to put them in as ...

I have to get local bussas to go for me ‘cuz I’m gangsta! did you mean to spell busses? That's actually kinda funny. :o

Just do me a favor a stop writing poems that end with a call for action!!! Just do me a favor and stop writing poems that end with a call ...

I don't want to grow up! It's fun being a child but the time does tick away too fast. It was descriptive and every thing. Very informative. I have no ...

They were soft and gantle, Gentle I would have said what happened next or later for that matter like he kissed me again as he stood with me at my ...

My ch 3 is stuck. I've written ch 4- 7 already in my note book but I got to get up ch 3. One min. and I'll try to start ...

Oh so that's how you see if they've reviewed or not. *back to subject* I think it pritty cool how you described a play, right? I also didn't get the ...

The boys broke away from a wall. Ok I'll try. Thanks.^-^

Okay I'll pm you when I get the next ch. in. ^-^ I'll go try and fix those typos too.

Yes I under stand. I love the country.^-^ I tryed my best to fix the errors. Some of it I totally took out but some of it I changed my ...

*Im at school^-^* It's a supped up bug though. You have to admit that would be awesome. And I shall remind you in a bit if I myself remember.

The romance will come trust me.