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Thank you!

Woo hoo! Chapter two! Nice. I just hope that it were a bit longer, so I could know more, I want to know more... Nice job! O.o

You really do sound like a salmon! X_x

I think that this is cool! You should definitely continue it, and I really liked the end. I would like to see what happens. Just be careful with the spelling ...

Hello Lili, I liked your story, but I agree that it goes a little too fast. I think you should either make the chapter longer, make two parts of the ...

You're welcome!

Thanks!

Thanks a lot Kasim. I get your points, but about the smell of the dead person, I didn't mean that Vladimir is the dead person, like a zombie. He smells ...

Thanks a lot for correcting it all! I can't believe I made all those mistakes, now I'll be more careful next time. And thanks for the recommendation of the book, ...