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Re: Before I Knock....
wow! this is really good!! I like how it flows. And I like the story line!!! it's so sweet. I know you told me to tear it apart, but I ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Calculus Musings
Hey!! I just wanted to say, oh my gosh, this is really good!!! I like the imagery, and the word choice. I really liked it. Keep up the good writing!!!!!
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Queen Delmont (Inkpop Challenge Story)
I really like it, even though I'm not much of a dystopian fan. I think if you added a bit more imagery I would like it even more. Just a ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Spider
I really like this poem. It makes Writing almost magical. Maybe it's because I'm a dark person, but the imagery was awesome!!! Thanks for putting up a Fantastic poem!!!
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Drama monolouge help?
The only thing I would do is keep your Stage direction formatting the same. Parenthesis or asterisk but not both.
May 31, 2011 -
Re: The Potential Student: A monologue
Wow!!! Extreme!! The only thing is you might want to add a few stage directions in. But besides that, Awesome!!
May 31, 2011 -
Re: small girl, little legs
Wow, Really good!!! I like the imagery, word choice, and the story!! Good job.
May 31, 2011 -
Re: A true writer
I only have one complaint, I feel it's to flat. I wish you would use a bit more Imagery. But overall, it's really good!!!
May 31, 2011 -
Re: You were wrong
I really liked this poem. However, I agree with the other about the last line. I think if you change the word choice, it'll be smoother. But overall, I liked ...
May 4, 2011