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Hey, winie! This is a sweet little anecdote that you've put up. I like the contrast between the two characters and the fact that one of them is trying so ...

Dogs! Lovely imagery that you've portrayed here. And bringing about the concept of Hades and Persephone was a really nice touch. This is definitely a great poem was losing me ...

Mikko!! Why hadn't I laid my eyes on this beautiful piece sooner? The description, the imagery, the structure, the rhyme, the sheer novelty and idea behind this piece is so ...

Hey, Gowrav! Unfortunately, this chapter left me a little disappointed. The subject matter, 'dialogue', the references to pop-culture and the main idea behind most of the details given here sound ...

Hey, snow! So this poem is quite dramatic and filled with expressions of great quality. Like creativity said, this piece is saying a story and you've done a swell job ...

Dogs! I like this piece a lot! And I'm sorry for being such a Disney noob, but I haven't the song yet. Dx Though it does read really well and ...

Hey, Thalizar! This poem has a lot of good meaning behind it. And I like the question-answer type of format you have going on here. You're writing about the trials ...

Hey, Pyro! This is a cute piece. In the second last stanza, you've spelled green as 'greeen', :) So that's the only correction I can find myself making. The short ...

Hey, Amy! So this piece has been getting a lot of mixed reviews from the audience. And it's quite easy to see why. With a title so bold and frank, ...

Hey, Snoink! This is a brilliant piece. The imagery, the rhyme and the whole story of hope all woven so intricately and with such great attention to the structure as ...

Mikko! This is a fine poem, brilliantly narrated with the anguish of a trapped lover. The last stanza is pure gold. The descriptions are really vivid and that brutal yet ...

Hey, demib! I do like this poem a lot. But it is still lacking in the wholesomeness of it. You see, you are talking about the Ocean's happiness and I'm ...

Hey, Kyllorac! Yes, I'm a big rhyming fan as well! And this is a great piece! short and lovely, quite charming too. Just a suggestion, but I believe that the ...

Hey, Anna! This is a great poem! And I love poems based off these classic and timeless stories. The day I fell down the rabbit hole, nowhere near was there ...

Hey, Mars! This is a great piece with crisp imagery and wonderful descriptions. The capitalization here is off, but for some reason I get the feeling that you've done it ...