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Hi Story! Yup, this sounds like an astronomical delicacy. It's neat and well structured with a good play on words and oh so delicious! I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. *burps* ...

Lava! So this poem is great! I may be mistaken but in my head, it's about sipping coffee or something like that and joys that a cuppa can bring to ...

Hi Joshua! So I'm back to review part 2 and I loved it! It was creative and really delved into the mind's eye. However, I can't help but feel underwhelmed ...

Hello, JP! This is a very interesting story and the mystery just consumes me! I like how you've managed to portray the reactions of the father as he tries to ...

Hi Confetti :) It's a very sweet and warm story that you've laid out for us here. About two friends and their journey through life together and when one of ...

Solly!!! This poem just blows me away. This is the type of poem that really makes me appreciate the fine talent that you bring to your work. I love this ...

Spinelli! Alright, so your poem is... yes, different. Not in a weird way, just in the way that - the reader needs to find a certain meaning among the various ...

Mikko! I really need to read your stuff more often 'cause you are such a talented writer. This poem has so much innocence attached to it because it is about ...

Hi Snickerdooly :) This piece is just classy and the more I read it, the more interested I get to read it again. I love the way you've rhythmically, through ...

Solly! XD Ah, change! its affects leave many profound as well as dis-heartened. Leaving 'home' to go off somewhere else and attempting to make a life despite all the uncertainties ...

Anna! Like Solly, I've become a fan too. This poem is exceptional, especially when you see it as a metaphor. It's such a simple stone-glass context and you've made it ...

Hi Tiny Dancer :) This poem is great. And since it is in rhyme, I'll give you extra brownie points! The fluidity of it is all good and there are ...

Qara! Sometimes we all feel that we are much less than what we truly are and start beating ourselves up about it. It's not about the number of times you ...

Gee! Epic awesomeness. The imagery is so good and really captivates my imagination. It has this very raw and straight-to-the-point feel to it. It's a great poem, no doubt. Your ...

Hi Angus! This is a brilliant piece and I share your sentiments as well. People yearn to be accepted and liberated of their uniqueness that makes them different from the ...