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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Amber (Chapters 1-2)

    This is a cool setting that feels like fantasy but also strangely Sci-Fi and also Minecraft...?(Sorry, multi-shot cross-bow just reminds me of Minecraft even though I don't play it) It's ...

    Jun 9
  • Poetry » General, General Re: highway hypnosis

    Wow. I almost feel like I'm in a car again going on a long road trip somewhere far away. I love the imagery here a lot. It really does bring ...

    Jun 9
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: secondhand smoke

    This is a very descriptive piece. I presume it is about the toxicity felt by the narrator to her partner, albeit literal toxicity in this sense. One is obsessed with ...

    Jun 8
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Ode to Routines/Habits

    Whew. This totally hit :( From the start of school until your retirement, one is destined to keep up the grind. I love the rhythm on this and how to ...

    Jun 8
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: When the Fourth Toll Sounds

    I find it certainly interesting that she is called a judge but not actually a judge. Is it like the title that she holds given to her by the people ...

    Jun 8


If it looks like a duck, and it quacks like a duck…you should not be so quick to jump to conclusions.
— Cecil Gershwin Palmer