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Thank you very much!! I definitely agree with your perspective on Zain and his appearance in the group. He is quiet and often forgettable because of this but I agree ...

I did not italicize the Styrkish language in this chapter because it is being spoken casually and naturally by native Styrkish speakers whereas previously, it was in the perspective of ...

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Thank you again! And I have a map drawn, albeit poorly, but I don%u2019t know how to share it on here%u2026

Thank you!!

Ooooooh yes!!! I love this new edit!

Thank you!! I kind of meant the bigotry part as the inherent sexism I often see in old sonnets where women are sexualized. But I definitely like your suggestion and ...

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Ooh! That sounds interesting! I definitely will be checking out your earlier chapters and please tag me in any upcoming ones!

Exactly

Thank you for this wonderful review! Wow, you review quickly! And yes, I realize my povs often take a personal approach, however, I see it as this narrator is inside ...

Wow thank you very much!

Thank you for this review! The game is made up and the era is pre-19th century, leaning more towards post-medieval.

Thank you for this wonderful review and all your great comments!!

Thank you for these wonderful reviews!! My story is about this prophecy proclaiming each of these people to go and retrieve these artifacts that are believed to once belong to ...