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Re: Temporary Happiness
sorry, it glitched: didn't mean to post it twice
Mon Jan 04, 2021 1:48 am -
Re: Temporary Happiness
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Mon Jan 04, 2021 1:47 am
I love this poem! The portrayal of worry of a lightened emotional state is so relatable. You beautifully portrayed that strange medium of joy and anxiety and confusion that we ... -
Re: Puppet Show
Ooh! I love that idea! And thank you for the feedback.
Mon Jan 04, 2021 12:35 am -
Re: Puppet Show
Thank you for your review! And yes, I know "line" and "time" don't rhyme but as they were somewhat similar in sound I thought I could make it pass, lol. ...
Sun Jan 03, 2021 9:55 pm -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 2]
Thank you so much!! And yes, I love Six of Crows too. I did base part of the concept with a quest of a ragtag group on that book, but ...
Sun Jan 03, 2021 6:37 pm -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 1]
Thank you so much! And thank you for using this as your first review!! I read Throne of Glass too, and I agree, not a big fan... (I felt the ...
Sun Jan 03, 2021 5:36 pm -
Re: An unwritten song
Thank you so much!!!
Sun Jan 03, 2021 4:37 pm -
Re: An unwritten song
Hi, I just joined this site and I'm wondering how you place your quotes from the work in the little bubble thing in your reviews? If you could help me ...
Sun Jan 03, 2021 4:31 pm -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 1]
What does it look like? I don't see that on my end, but I'd like to fix it.
Sun Jan 03, 2021 3:38 pm -
Re: A Father's Wish - Prologue
Oh, okay! Thank you for the clarification!
Sun Jan 03, 2021 5:49 am -
Re: An Unlit Sky and Inky Sea
Beautiful! I love this new edit!
Sun Jan 03, 2021 5:16 am -
Re: ...
Hello!! Grows: As a reader first going into your story, your first line, "I do not know when I was born", could be stronger and does not have the pull ...
Sun Jan 03, 2021 5:14 am -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 1]
Thank you for your feedback! I do have a question though in regards to your advice on the "white space" when someone speaks. Do you mean formatting-wise, because on my ...
Sun Jan 03, 2021 4:30 am
