moonlight123

This is an interesting poem, it was different. I like the way you started it, with the water hitting your back. The way you sort of narrated your thought process ...

As the others said, you did an excelent job with turning the nursery rhymes from something sweet into something dark. I liked the way the first part was mature in ...

I really liked it! You captured the pain, the suffering. At first it seemed to be another poem about awful things in life and such, the ending caught me off ...

Wow. That's all I had to say when I was done with this. It's just so, so heartfelt and real. It really lets the reader feel the emotions. I can't ...

I know it was a bit cliched, I know it was a bit short, but I really don't care because I loved your poem! It was simple and said it ...

I thought it was great. I said before that I liked this, but you should've kept this as the prologue!!! it flowed better. Anyway it was less boring than the ...

hey Selene, It started off well but then went downhill (It sounded a lot like my writing actually) it began to get very boring by the end of it as ...

I thought that it was brillant! It was so true to life! (and I do the exact same thing with the words tumbling out when I write...) :D Everyone else ...

I love the way your poem definetly has rythum to it, (something that is close to impossible for me to accomplish) and the beginning of it was awesome: Your mother, ...

I would just like to first say that I absolutely loved it! From the very first line it sucked my right in. That's one of the most important things in ...

Your poem seems to speak to me as I imagine it must to many. When someone sees people happy, all around them and they feel empty, and a great longing ...

That is one of the most interesting poems I've read. It got me thinking about how humanists must feel like they have such a short amount of time for living. ...