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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Power

    Hey there, first off I'm really sorry this hurt you. I definitely didn't intend for it to be harmful or mocking, just a different point of view. I was raised ...

    Mar 31, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: Paralysis

    Hi, thanks for the review! Usually for me I slowly come out of paralysis almost like I'm fading back into movement, if that makes sense. I tried to incorporate that ...

    Oct 12, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: Paralysis

    Oct 5, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Final Ritual

    Thank you so much

    Oct 4, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Final Ritual

    I'm so glad you liked it! I originally wrote it for a school assignment with a strict word count so that kind of forced me to fit as much worldbuilding ...

    Sep 26, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Final Ritual

    Thank you, this was a really helpful review! I originally planned for this to just be a one-off story but I'm not totally opposed to continuing this world. You gave ...

    Sep 26, 2024


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