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The Mortal Instruments Series (City of Bones/City of Ashes/City of Glass), I read the first chapters of all of them. Uh... Extremely unrealistic, totally hate Clary and Jace, such annoying ...

first question: is this the first chapter? if so, make it LOTS longer. this is barely a paragraph. i mean, even for a preface or prolouge, its incredibly short and ...

well, firstly, there is a forum specially made for these posts so that they don't clutter the main forums. and, as far as the idea goes, its been done before. ...

wow. rather interesting. i began reading it thinking that it was about possibly... hate? but i really like the turning point. "it is something so much more..." really quite a ...

i found myself hooked after the first sentence! though, i was kind of getting annoyed towards the middle, thought he was going to choose the princess XD i'm absolutely in ...

okay so, i'm not going to give an incredibly long review, so i'll just run through the main problems i see. (because i'm too lazy to weed through everything for ...