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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Red Stiletto

    I really can't tell you how much I love this poem. Like it's just so...hilariously inviting that...I don't know I can't really pin-point it but that's definately up there with ...

    Jan 26, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: (E&iC) Could it be more ridiculous?

    I'm not sure if this was supposed to be a funny piece or not, but I must tell you that it made my day. I really did laugh in the ...

    Jan 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Ugly melodies/Silent songs

    I must tell you how much I adore that poem. You're such a beautiful writer and I think you should stick with poetry. I've posted some poetry but it isn't ...

    Jan 23, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Story, name undecided

    I like this, I really do. I don't understand why you were so down on yourself before because this was a good start. Your style of writing reminds me a ...

    Jan 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emerald Eyes

    At first I thought this was a love poem and I thought the food bowl thing was just metaphorically speaking. Ha ha. Okay so now I know your talking about ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Last Storm (1)

    Interesting. It kind of reminded me of the first chapter of Interview with the Vampire. If you've never read it, it's an awesome book. I like how you introduce the ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter One: The City is Strange

    Hey! I promised you I'd be here haha:) Well I really did enjoy that. I like how her life is sort of broken and yet she seems to fit so ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: the battle of the books chapter one

    Well I must say that was very interesting. One thing that I, personally, would do, is thread in a little bit more emotion. That's pretty much the way I write ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Story Deleted

    Wow this really drew me. It reminded me of the kind of books I look for when I walk into a bookstore. I'm a sucker for young married couples and ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: photons, excite!

    I LOVE that poem! It was so beautifully romantic yet not cloying at all (some parts made me laugh:)). It kind of reminded me of the scriptures in Song of ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: perspective of an entertainer-PG13 (edited version)

    Well, I must say that was very different(lol). I liked how Jenny seemed so much more insightful than the others. I feel like there's more to her than meets the ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Thorns & Roses [5]

    I loved it. I disagree with everyone else; I really didn't think it was all over the place. You made it so easy to relate to. Victoria kind of reminds ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Something on the desk :)

    I really liked it and you were able to catch my attention in the first three paragraphs. To me, that's huge because very few people can. I'm new to YWS ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.8) [newly edited]

    Hey:) This is my first time reading your story and I thought it was awesome and very well written. It's very different than most of the stuff out there, and ...

    Jan 7, 2010


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