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Re: Our Vision of Change
This was a very powerful, insightful, and emotional poem for me. Incredible wisdom shown, and you're sure you're only 16? What amazing imagery and what huge feelings this brought to ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: A house burns down from the POV of the fire.
What an original and well-crafted idea! Giving a force of nature a personality is no easy feat, and against the backdrop of a family being torn apart only to come ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Music To My Ears, Pages 1-14
For starters, this was very well written. It was a little unexpected, as I am used to writing comic book scripts, which read a little more like a script for ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: A Pandamonium Extravaganza
I quite enjoyed the warm sentiment of this poem. It forces a vision of meeting your future wife on the midway of some carnival, falling in love and winning her ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Paintball Poetry
How romantic, yet somewhat provocative and a little dirty! Or maybe its just my mind making it that way? "The scent of love rise up like rain on dry dirt." ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Puddles
That was a highly imaginative and descriptive look at the dark side of what lies around us almost every day. And it is also deeply psychological as well. The thought ...
Jan 17, 2014
