modernzombie

i understand what you mean! i will go through and edit the beginning(: im really glad you liked it and thanks for the great review!

thanks for copying and pasting a review someone else wrote...

i thought i spelled hue wrong!! but my spell check said it right i completely forgot it was also a name... I'll go back and fix those mistakes(: I'm glad ...

i wasnt sure if i was clear about what it is so i decided to say it at the end:p But thank you very much for the positive reviews!

hello! Thanks for your time(: I understand what you mean by adding more descriptions to the narrators life. By fight i mean life, like she would give up her life, ...

Thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it! Yes i tried not to be to mainstream on the whole "the golden gates open and my savior awaits" kind of thing because ...

Thank you for the compliments! I agree with you on loving dark poetry. People always ask me why i write it and i simply tell them "Life isn't always happy, ...

Thanks so much for the grammar help! I should probably pay more attention in language arts, but I'm sure ill get better soon! Your review really helped, I never knew ...

thank you! I only know nothing about poetry except i do my best to make it rhyme.. I get your point with the rhyming pattern and i'm going to go ...

i wrote it very quickly but i am glad you enjoyed it! i did change the rhyme pattern a little as i went on with the poem because i thought ...

I'm glad you enjoyed this(: I'll work on grammar in the future i'm just terrible with it and i find it much easier to have my mom edit them so ...

i suppose your right! I think you should, or you could start something else... i just like reading what you write :)

okay thank you!

we're opposites. Im pretty good with description but i struggle with grammar. Mainly because im your average careless teen when it comes to spelling.. but Just keep doing what your ...

this is true, i find beginnings the hardest to write but i'll try starting in the middle next time! Theres one other thing i would like you to review i ...