mnesomeye

Heya - nice job, Vox! This was v. interesting to read, and you've kept us in suspense throughout the entire thing. Not many people can pull that off, so congrats. ...

*screams hysterically and collapses to floor* Dammit. Another cliff hanger. =_= I found another story like this over on FF.net, so I'm dissecting that one instead ;P What is it ...

Oooh, I appear to be the first reviewer! *claps* Hi, I'm Mnesomeye - nice to meet you. ^_^ Anyway. *rolls up sleeves* Let's do this. An empty bottle, an empty ...

In the first part there was something, uhm, "not quite right"... but then as your emotion began building so did the quality. I think I actually like it this way ...

Oh wow! This line here: (and when i kiss you, God laughs and a thousand and one stars twinkle.) Made me a very, very happy bunny. *laughs* I saw you ...

Eh. Wow. There are some mixed emotions going on in this forum. *scratches head* I can see where they're coming from... but you're only a novice! Aww. Well... I thought ...

Really great attempt at a sonnet! I think that these, apart from cinquains, are one of the hardest 'set' forms of poetry to write in. You've done a great job ...

Bonjour; je m'appelle Mnesomeye, and I will be tearing apart your poem today. *smirks* (I don't mean any harm - but when I see something good, I just can't help ...

Hi - great story idea, but (I know you've read this countless times now) it went too quickly. When I read stories, I can, uhm, how can I explain this... ...

And Hell matched her steps. ....dang. That is one powerful line. Problem is, I don't understand why. *laughs* .... seriously, though. I don't know. Why was Hell there if she'd ...

It has already been severely pulled apart *looks pointedly at the last post* so I have nothing left to give except a "Well done!" and kiss from me. *mwah* The ...

This was really good - I could've critiqued, but once somebody's done it *points to your first review* then I just figure, what's the point? They've done all the work ...

EDIT: Man, I really need to stop writing so much. =_= Stupid thing counted as a review... S'already been reviewed in detail enough. I'm late again. *sighs* This is an ...

EDIT: Aww CRUD, I'm not the first reviewer! *pokes post above with a stick* Wow. And you know what? Even though my experiences of Africa haven't been so good (I ...

Edit after reading the review below - warning, very strong opinions attached : "Sorry if I sound harsh"? I don't think harsh is - no pun intended - harsh enough ...