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Hey! M here for a quick review. Tick. Tick. Tick. Tick. With every second the clocked ticked my eyes would blink. I was in a sort of trance, you could ...

Hey, it's Marlow here to do a review! Due to the fact that I absolutely loved your story, this review is going to be long. To begin, your writing is ...

Hello again, here for a short review! I have some Christmas shopping I need to get to! Thanks for telling me that the next chapter was out. As I said ...

WOW! This truly was a masterpiece! I could tell you have spent a long time writing this! I loved the old language and how you tranlated it flawlessly. There was ...

Well done, this first chapter is a true hit! Here's my critique: First off, I thought your transition getting your protagonist to school was really smooth and that can be ...

Hey there! I absolutely love this funky style you've got rolling; you've got me hooked. Seriously, you have a big portion of supporters in the YWS community and that can ...

I loved this story! I know you're saying this a rough draft but I thought it was really well written and heartbreaking. Thank you for writing it! Now, my few ...

sorry about two reviews lol

Hey! This was written Rick Riordan style but I still liked it! Interesting story you have rolling but I think you have something good going on here. You a Percy ...

Hi there! This work was very well edited! I have to admit I haven't read the first chapter but I still enjoyed reading this. Alright, just some nitpicks: 1) First, ...

Hi there! This was a depressing chapter but we all have to have those to make a great story. I'm really hoping to find out even more about the characters. ...

Hi there! I loved this short story. It was filled with such raw emotion and truthfulness. Now, I read this over twice and found one thing that couldn't be fixed. ...

Hi there! I'm just dropping by to do a quick review. Alright, first things first, I think that this chapter could have a little more conflict and maybe even a ...

Hi there! I'm loving the story and am excited to see where it's heading! What will Ember find out? Will Keegan find out more about Ember's background? EECK! Such suspense. ...

Hi there! I love the idea for this book! I also love the potential for all these characters. They are well thought up and I love the secrets they all ...