mkphoenix

Ohhhh!!!! Sorry, didn't know that.

Hello! I really enjoyed this, very intriguing. The thing that stood out the most to me was the fact that you were able to capture some important details about her ...

I definitely agree with the first two suggestions, thanks for pointing those out. But I disagree with the third paragraph one. There's a reason I don't make each of my ...

Thanks for the review and all the nice things you just said! Wow! I really didn't know if these were any good, so this is really making me ecstatic! To ...

Wow, thank you, honestly, this made me so happy. I LOVED your suggestions and I'm going to edit that as soon as possible. I love getting feedback on how I ...

thank you so much for the compliments and the review. To answer your question, kind of yes, the character was hit by a car/ hit a car. I tried to ...

Wow, I read this whole thing smiling so much my cheeks hurt. Thank you so much, I'm incredibly happy that you enjoyed this! You were right for those two mistakes, ...

Thanks for the feedback, it's much appreciated! I'll definitely take this into consideration when I write. Also, thanks again for the welcome.