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You got it right! I was definitely trying to kept it vague, however I can now see how it could be confusing. Thank you so much for your feedback!!

I really enjoyed this poem. It was definitely dark, but it was still good. Most of my critiques align with other ones in the comments, like repetition. I would definitely ...

Hi! Although I am intrigued by the premise. The structure and grammar is definitely all over the place. I am horrible at grammar myself so I really cannot fault you ...

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Sorry I am not the best reviewer. I was really intrigued by your prologue and look forward to the next installment! Your opening paragraph was very poetic. I hope to ...