mizz-iceberg

Welcome! Have you introduced yourself over at the Welcome forum? Don't hesitate to post your work, as long as you have edited and revised it to the best of your ...

Hey there! The Gift of the Magi is a wonderful short story! Your story resembles it too much for me to have enjoyed your writing without comparing it to the ...

Hey Kylan! So I read through all the chapters today and I'm really relishing this story. The characters, your words, the incidents, they all go along so well. As I've ...

Hey there Kylan! Few nitpicks first: It is cold and hard to the touch I like how you add those sentences after each paragraph, but I did not like that ...

Ah Kylan, this is beautiful! He smokes a cigarette. It is cold, but he has his sleeves rolled up to his elbows. He always keeps them rolled up. It keeps ...

Very interesting! I would like to read more. It's very short, so I don't have much to comment on, just the fact that I like the idea of having a ...

Please be mindful that "Lyric Poetry" does not necessarily mean Lyrics. Meaning, this is not the place for songs. "Lyric poetry expresses the wishes, the hopes, the joys, and the ...

I really like this! Especially the second half of it. Just a few quick suggestions: You started the chapter very well! I was right away hooked and and very interested. ...

New member I see! Welcome to YWS! Now over all, I like the first chapter. As to whether its original or not, I can't say because I don't read much ...

Thanks for PMing and letting me know this chapter is up. I don't get much time to be on YWS, and I certainly wouldn't have remembered to look for the ...

Hello! Sorry it took so long to get to review this, I've been very busy lately. Like Angel, I too liked this chapter more. I definitely have a better idea ...

Hello! I saw your post over at the Welcome Forum, but didn't get a chance to drop in and welcome you. So welcome to YWS! Hope you're having a good ...

Hello there! Let's get right to the review shall we. The carriage came to a sudden mercifully halt and Louisa helped her mother from the carriage with the aid of ...

Hey there! New member, I see. Welcome to YWS! Why don't you introduce yourself over at the Welcome forum? Also please make sure you review two posts before posting your ...

Awesome Snoink! This poem made me smile. :)