mizz-iceberg

Hello Salma! Welcome to YWS! I absolutely understand what you are saying in this poem. I do like that I can relate to it. They say: scars fade, They say: ...

Hello! This story had a simple beauty to it, which was marred by the lack of editing and the abundant typos and many grammatical errors. I recommend you going through ...

Here by request! This review is going to be done in parts. This post is for the first part of your story. I'm going to be as honest as possible, ...

Hello Pen! Here by request. And, yes my thread is open for reviews. : ) Here goes: I like that this poem has a clear view point, and one main ...

Hello Legend! One does not have to write a lengthy poem to convey an extremely complicated matter. The poets are those who can say lots, in a few simple words. ...

Eraqio, this is my first time reading your writing, and I have to say I'm impressed. You has a fan, mister! :P Your writing is very beautiful. I'm going to ...

Hey Incognito! This story resembles a short story I read a quite a while ago, too much for me to ignore. I'll link you to that story. Choice by W. ...

Hello Zanna! Exceptional imagery here. A very beautiful piece of writing. I could feel the pleasure of drifting down in world created by one's own imagination. To write such a ...

That was a twisted piece of writing indeed! The writing itself, I absolutely loved, but like some other people before me, I would have liked some sort of plot. I ...

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Hola Sinorita! Here by request! Very interesting story here. I like how you've got a rich kid and then a poor kid and you compare their lives. However while reading ...

Hello Rosey! Like the other I do like the child's perspective. However, I still can't really click with the MC. I think it's because since you're doing first person, the ...

Here by request! =) I have not read the reviews posted before me, so if I repeat anything, forgive me. Lets first start on the nitpicks. She remembered the words ...

Hello Conrad! Dana nodded. “In it’s own horrible way, it’s beautiful.” It's should be its. You've got the second it's right. ‘ God doesn’t want to see us, ’ Rob ...

Welcome to YWS! I'd like to request you to change the case of your work, Lowercase would be much better. Caps give the feeling of yelling or being shout at. ...